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minus-squareAnticorp@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up8arrow-down3·2 years agoA few too many commas in that line. Eh?
minus-squareCoggyMcFee@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up4·edit-22 years agoI mean you could put dashes on either side of “all of them” potentially instead of commas, but commas also work, especially in more poetic prose. Where would you straight-up remove a comma from the line?
minus-squarelewdian69@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1·2 years agoCould use one more between “Sauron” and “and”
minus-squareIllecors@lemmy.cafelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2arrow-down1·2 years agoNo, that’s normal. Might look strange for a native english speaker, but it definitely normal in othet languages.
A few too many commas in that line. Eh?
I mean you could put dashes on either side of “all of them” potentially instead of commas, but commas also work, especially in more poetic prose. Where would you straight-up remove a comma from the line?
Could use one more between “Sauron” and “and”
No, that’s normal. Might look strange for a native english speaker, but it definitely normal in othet languages.